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š§ IN TODAYāS EMAIL:
š§ Tool Of The Day:
Itās not too late - 6hrs left.
š§Ŗ Hook Science:
Adding a single word could get you the click.
š” A Clickable Content Idea For You:
Your audience may forget these tasks ā so remind them.
Headline template included šļø
š Hook Of The Day:
They turned their weakness into one of the greatest hooks of all time.
š§ TOOL OF THE DAY
Headline Fix-Up: 30 Seconds To A Perfect Headline
Access Closing In 6 Hours
So many content creators write headlines that:
ā Are basic, bland, and not emotion-driven.
ā Donāt stop their audience mid-scroll or get them to click.
Hereās why this is a massive problem:
When the headline doesnāt get clicked, the content doesnāt get read or viewed.
It will be ignored.
Iāve shared countless tips on writing better headlines and hooks in this newsletter.
I know it can be hard to keep track of.
So Iāve distilled everything into a dead-simple, 3-step process that anyone can use to turn a bad headline into a āmagnetic headlineā.
A headline that generates clicks and views on demand by tapping into the audienceās āemotional brainā.
The process is called āHeadline Fix-Upā ā and Iāve put everything you need to know about it into a digestible online course.
š§Ŗ HOOK SCIENCE
Get More Clicks By Adding Seasonal Context To Your Headlines
Which of these headlines grabs your attention more?
7 Essential Tips To Prevent Car Breakdowns
7 Essential Tips To Prevent Winter Car Breakdowns
If I had to guess, Iād say the second one does.
Why?
Because itās more specific ā and specificity is the foundation of a great hook.
It removes the guesswork and lets the audience know exactly what your content can do for them.
A single word ā āwinterā ā makes all the difference.
Seasonal content does so well because it seems urgent, fresh, and relevant.
It taps into the audienceās desire to be prepared for whatās ahead and so makes them more likely to click.

You can create seasonal content in practically any niche.
Examples:
Gardening: ā5 Perfect Bulbs To Plant This Fall For For A Blooming Spring Gardenā
Personal Finance: āA Post-Christmas Finance Checklist To Prepare For A Prosperous New Yearā
Real Estate: ā7 Tips To Sell Your Home During The Quiet Winter Seasonā
š” Takeaway: Adding seasonal context to your content (and headlines) can boost its value and urgency.
š” A CLICKABLE CONTENT IDEA FOR YOU
Tell Your Audience What They Shouldnāt Forget
šØ Your Headline Template:
"Before You Start [Action], Donāt Forget To Do These [Number] [Tasks]"
š The Inspiration:
āBefore You Start Spring Cleaning, Donāt Forget To Do These 6 Tasksā
š§ Why The Headline Works:
Checklist Appeal: Weāre drawn towards completing tasks and lists ā it gives us a sense of accomplishment and order.
Loss Aversion: "Donāt Forget" plays on our fear of making mistakes. Remember, the desire to avoid losses is stronger than the desire to gain.
š How To Adapt It For Your Niche:
Identify The Action: Think about a common action relevant to your niche.
Determine Key Tasks: List critical but often overlooked tasks associated with this action.
šØ Speed Things Up With ChatGPT:
Not sure where to start?
Copy and paste the following prompt into ChatGPT after filling in your niche.
Hi ChatGPT,
I'm a content creator in the [insert niche] niche, and I'm creating a piece of content based on the headline template:
"Before You Start [Action], Donāt Forget To Do These [Number] Tasks"
I need 10 headline ideas that follow this headline template please.
Each one should:
- Pick a common and specific niche-related related action.
- Determine the crucial and often overlooked tasks that people should remember before starting this action.
šØ Examples Using The Template:
For Creators:
For Fitness: āBefore You Start Your CrossFit Session, Donāt Forget These 5 Stretchesā
For Gardening: āBefore You Start Planting Vegetables, Donāt Forget These 5 Soil Preparationsā
For Businesses Doing Content Marketing (B2C):
Pet Supplies Store: āBefore You Start Grooming Your Dog, Donāt Forget These 5 Tasksā
Travel Agency: āBefore You Leave For Yosemite, Donāt Forget To Pack These 8 Itemsā
For Businesses Doing Content Marketing (B2B):
HR Firm: āBefore You Start Recruiting Employees, Donāt Forget These 7 Onboarding Tasksā
Digital Marketing Agency: āBefore You Launch Your Google Ad Campaign, Donāt Forget These 5 Tasksā
š HOOK OF THE DAY
āAvis Is Only No. 2 In Rent A Cars. So We Try Harderā
Avis' legendary slogan admitted that they werenāt the market leader ("No.2 in rent-a-cars") and used this as a strength by promising to "try harder" than the No. 1 (Hertz).
The slogan became one of the most effective and famous hooks of all time.
š§ Hook Psychology:
Pratfall Effect: Acknowledging imperfections makes a brand seem more relatable and trustworthy.
Underdog Appeal: We root for underdogs. Avis positioned itself as striving harder due to its second-place status.
The slogan became a cornerstone of Avis' brand identity and dramatically improved its market share.
š” Takeaway: Acknowledging imperfections and challenges can make for a great hook ā it makes you stand out from competitors who just drone on about how good they are.
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