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🧪 Hook Science:
“The golden stack” — a headline and opening hook template to try out in your niche.
🍬 Link Candy For Creators:
A trick to make any piece of writing more intriguing, plus a prompt to make ChatGPT sound less robotic.
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🧪 HOOK SCIENCE
“The Golden Stack”: A Template For A Headline And Opening Hook — Try It Out In Your Own Niche
We briefly went through this beautiful hook in a previous newsletter.
But I wanted to turn the headline and the opening few lines into a template for you to use in your own content.
A blog post, a video, or anything else.
So here it is again — the headline and opening from a viral video by personal development YouTuber Jordan Thornton.
🔎 The Original Headline:
“I Read 133 Psychology Books: Here Are My Top 12”
🎣 The Original Opening Lines:
“These 12 books are rare.
You will not find them anywhere else on YouTube because they typically have zero Amazon reviewers and the average publication date is 1989.
It’s taken me thousands of hours to condense this year's research of 133 psychology books into this golden stack of 12”
🧠 Why It Works
Costly Signaling: Mentioning how much time and effort has gone into the content increases its perceived value.
Exclusivity: "Rare" suggests that the information is not commonly known or widely shared. Privileged info is always intriguing.
🔨 Your Template (Headline + Opening)
Headline Template: “I [Tested/Explored] [Number] [Items]: Here Are My Top [Number]
Opening Template:
"These [number] [items/topics] are rare.
I can confidently say you will not find them anywhere else on [Platform/Location] because they typically have [specific unique characteristic, e.g., zero reviews, are not in stores, are only taught to insiders, etc].
It has taken [significant amount of time/effort] to condense this research of [total number of items/topics explored] into this golden collection of [number]."
🎨 Examples Of Headlines + Openings Using This Template (3 Different Niches)
Example 1: Fitness
Headline: “I Reviewed 212 Calisthenics Exercises - Here Are My Top 3”
Opening: "These 3 calisthenics exercises are rare. I can confidently say you will not see them in your average gym because they come from specialized trainers and are usually taught to elite athletes. It has taken me over 20 hours to condense this research of 212 calisthenics exercises into this golden collection of 3".
Example 2: Travel Agency
Headline: “We Explored 89 Hidden Travel Destinations - Here Are Our Top 5”
Opening: "These 5 travel destinations are rare. We can confidently say you will not find them in any mainstream travel guide because they are typically only known only to locals. It has taken us over 30 hours to condense this research of 89 hidden destinations into this golden collection of 5."
Example 3: Project Manager
Headline: “I Tested 21 Project Management Tools - Here Are My Top 3”
Opening: "These 3 project management tools are rare. I can confidently say you will not find them in standard software lists because they typically have very few online mentions. It has taken me over 3 months of hands-on testing to condense this research of 21 tools into this golden collection of 3."
Try it out.
Research a bunch of items and give the audience your top rare finds in one glorious piece of content.
💨 Speed Things Up With ChatGPT:
If you aren’t sure where to start, copy and paste the following into ChatGPT after filling in your niche and target audience:
Hi ChatGPT,
I'm a content creator in the [insert niche] niche and my target audience is [insert target audience]. I want to create content based on the following headline and opening template:
Headline Template: “I [Tested/Explored] [Number] [Items]: Here Are My Top [Number]
Opening Template:
"These [number] [items/topics] are rare.
I can confidently say you will not find them anywhere else on [Platform/Location] because they typically have [specific unique characteristic, e.g., zero reviews, are not sold in stores, etc].
It has taken [significant amount of time/effort] to condense this research of [total number of items/topics explored] into this golden collection of [number]."
Please generate 3 examples of headlines with their corresponding openings that follow this template closely, replacing just the bracketed words.
The examples should cover 3 different, specific topics relevant to my niche and should not be generic or broad.
🍬 LINK CANDY FOR CREATORS
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