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2 Unusual Psychological Triggers That Will Get Your Reviews Clicked And Viewed

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š§ Creator Tool Of The Day:
21 psychology-driven email subject line tricks to boost your open rate.
š” Psychology-Backed Content Trick:
Most content creators write/create reviews of products or services at times. Hereās how to use psychology to make that content ābuzzā enough to get clicked and viewed.
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Letās get to it.
š§ tool of the day
New Cheat Sheet š„³
The email newsletter youāre reading right now has an industry-leading open rate of 52%.
I wonāt lie - it took many painful months to get there.
Letās just say I struggled with desperately low open rates for a long time.
Plus, I wasted so many hours on ābusy workā that didnāt move the needle.
The biggest difference came from testing dozens of psychology-driven email subject line styles and formats.
Iāve condensed all of it into a handy PDF cheat sheet containing 21 email subject line tricks to test out yourself.
It gives you quick and actionable tactics (with examples) to increase your open rates with hardly any extra effort.
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A Psychology-Driven Headline Tweak To Get Your Reviews Clicked And Viewed
Whoās seen this type of headline before?
āMacBook Pro 2023 Review: A Detailed Takeā
āVitamix E310 Explorian Blender: What You Need To Knowā
Donāt get me wrong - they arenāt terrible.
Theyāre clear, factual, and straightforward.
But ultimately, they donāt do the one thing headlines are supposed to do:
Spark curiosity.
Hereās a simple technique for writing review headlines that do spark curiosity:
Add some social proof and/or FOMO.
Itāll pop some ābuzzā into your content.
Yep, and all it usually takes is a few extra words.
Hereās howā¦
How To Add Social Proof And FOMO To Your Review Content ā Trust Me, Itāll Get Them Clicked
Theyāre both powerful, but subtly different psychological triggers.
Social Proof: Itās when people copy what others are doing because they think itās the ācorrectā behavior.
FOMO: Itās the worry that youāre missing out on important experiences others are having.
Hereās the key:
š” Highlight that the product, service, activity, or topic you're reviewing has already been validated by others, is getting attention, and/or is part of a current trend.
Two Examples Of Headlines That Crush It With Social Proof/FOMO
Headline 1:
āThis Book Sold 100,000 Copies In One Day ā Everything to Know About the Fantasy Series Taking Over BookTokā - The Messenger
The headline highlights the massive popularity of the book (social proof) and that itās part of a trending movement (FOMO).
It also keeps the name of the series hidden, urging the audience to click and find out more.
Itās a little long, but it fills you with curiosity.
Hereās a shorter oneā¦
Headline 2:
āItās the Most Hyped Burger in Years ā But Is It Any Good?ā - Grub Street
The word āhypedā combines social proof and FOMO.
Itās essentially saying:
Lots of people are eating this burger.
Lots of people are talking about this burger.
It then cleverly ends with a question that makes us wonder whether that hype is justified.
And again, the name of the product is hidden.
We canāt help but click to find out more.
How To Apply This To Your Own Review Content
Identify āBuzzworthyā Points: Look for statistics, sales figures, trending topics, or anything that suggests the product/subject is getting attention. Anything from social media trends to sales milestones.
Add Some Intrigue: Try phrases like "Here's why everyone's talking about..." or "Why is this [product] suddenly all over your feed?" to generate buzz and imply widespread interest (if true).
Try Questions: Sometimes, a question can be more engaging than a straightforward statement. Eg. āIs this the best [product] of the year?ā
Highlight Unique Features: If the product has a unique feature that's causing buzz, highlight that in the headline. Eg. āThe [product] with [feature] that's taking Instagram by stormā.
Itās Happening As We Speakā¦
Type āStanley Cupā into Google News for present-day examples of headlines using social proof and FOMO in full force.

Your Next 3 Steps:
Apply This To New Content: Use social proof and FOMO in the headlines of your upcoming reviews to test their impact on click-through rate/engagement.
Keep Up with Trends: Keep an eye on current trends, popular topics, and viral products in your niche. Use these insights to write headlines that tap into trending interests and conversations.
Ask Your Audience: Engage with your readers or viewers by asking what they're interested in or talking about right now.
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