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The Biggest Headline Mistake Content Creators Aren't Even Aware They're Making

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š” Psychology-Driven Content Trick:
Make this simple tweak to your headline (or the content will be ignored).
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Make This Simple Tweak To Your Headline (Or The Content Will Be Ignored)
Who here has seen headlines like these?
āImprove Your Life With These 5 Changesā
ā6 Helpful Tips For Better Business Successā
They arenāt the worst.
There arenāt any grammatical errors and they arenāt necessarily confusing.
But I have no desire to click on them.
Sure, Iād love to āimprove my lifeā and I definitely wouldnāt say no to ābetter business successā.
But I have zero confidence that those pieces of content would help me achieve either of those goals.
The reason for this is that the headlines lack an ingredient essential for getting a piece of content clicked.
That ingredient is specificity.
A common mistake made by content creators is assuming that vague, mysterious headlines increase curiosity.
But that couldnāt be further from the truthā¦
Why Do Specific Details Make Headlines More Clickable Than Vague Details?
š” Headlines with specific details are seen as more credible and trustworthy. They also reduce uncertainty, making it easier for people to realize whether or not theyāll benefit from the content.
Letās take the first example:
āImprove Your Life With These 5 Changesā
And add some specificity:
āLife Coachās 5 Hacks To Boost Afternoon Productivity By 18%ā
Weāve taken it to the extreme here, but youāll notice how it immediately becomes more clickable.
Now, the audience knows:
The source of the information (life coach).
The benefit (afternoon productivity hacks).
The scale of the benefit (18%).
The content seems more credible and the benefit is more certain.
This makes them more curious and less likely to ignore it.
š” āAmbiguity Aversionā: We avoid options with unknown outcomes and prefer choices that offer more certainty.
But hereās the keyā¦
The headline doesnāt give everything away.
Thereās a clear ācuriosity gapā left by the headline because the audience is still left wondering what the ā5 Hacksā are.
So they click to consume the content and close that gap.
Specific Details To Look For And Add To Your Headlines
Here are some specific details you could look for in your content and then add to your headline:
Numbers and Statistics: Use exact figures to quantify value.
E.g., āIncrease ___ Efficiency By 24%.ā
Time Frames: Specify exact durations to set expectations.
E.g., ā3-Day Workout Planā or ā60-Minute Meal Prep Guideā¦ā
Specific Audience: Tailor the headline by calling out a particular group.
E.g., āā¦For New Momsā or āFreelancersā Guide....ā
Specific Locations: Add geographical specificity when relevant.
E.g., ā5 Hidden Beaches in Northern Baliā¦ā
Names And Titles: Include well-known names or titles.
E.g., āStephen Kingās 7 Writing Tipsā¦ā or āNASA Engineerās Take On Asteroid Mining Trend...ā
Specific Problems: Address particular issues or challenges.
E.g., āSolving The Tiny House Kitchen Storage Dilemma.ā
Your 2-Step Summary:
Find Specifics: Take concrete details like numbers, time frames, target groups, or expert names from your content.
Embed In Headlines: Use these specifics in your headlines to make the content look more credible and to make the benefit more certain.
Whenever Youāre Ready:
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