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This Non-Obvious Addition To Your Headline Will Make It Trustworthy Enough To Click

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In this email:
đĄ Psychology-Backed Content Trick:
A simple 2-step tweak to make any headline more trustworthy (and clickworthy).
đ° Rabbit Holes And Resources:
How to use âconfirmation biasâ to get more clicks, a 3-step process for fixing a forgettable headline, and more.
Letâs get to it.
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This Non-Obvious Addition To Your Headline Will Make It Trustworthy Enough To Click
Hereâs a sad but familiar sequence of events many of us go through:
Spend hours or even days making excellent content.
Spend seconds writing a bad headline.
Get nowhere near as many clicks or views as the content deserves.
Stress out, frantically try to improve the content, and eventually get demoralized.
Remember, in this case, the content is already great.
Itâs high-quality and engaging.
The problem lies in step 2: the bad headline.
If the headline isnât trustworthy enough to click, it doesnât matter how trustworthy the content is in itself.
Because no one will click through to find out.
đĄ The headline should indicate why the content is trustworthy enough to read or watch in order to get people to click.
Hereâs a simple method of increasing the trustworthiness of a headline that doesnât even require that youâre an âexpertâ:
Highlight your firsthand experience in the topic.
Letâs talk through how to use this simple headline addition to get your content more clicks and attention.
How To Add Firsthand Experience To Your Headlines To Make Them More Trustworthy
When the audience believes you have firsthand experience or genuine insight, theyâre more likely to engage with the content.
It adds a layer of credibility.
In some cases, even more than an âexpertâ in the topic might have.
Itâs a 2-step process:
Highlight your firsthand experience
Promise genuine insight
Itâs about saying âIâve been where you are and hereâs what I found outâ.
Hereâs an example:
âI Spent 3 Weeks With A 3D Printer - Here's What I Learnedâ
In this (real) headline, the firsthand experience is emphasized (âI spent 3 weeksâ) and genuine insight is then promised (âhereâs what I learnedâ).
Their firsthand experience adds trust and so demands more attention.
The more specific you can make the headline, the more credible itâll be.
Eg. â3 Weeks With A 3D Printerâ is more effective than âI Spent Time With A 3D Printerâ.
4 Types Of Firsthand Experience You Could Highlight In Your Headlines
Tangible experiences: Promise insights from a physical and relatable experience.
Eg. âOne Month With A Foldable Flip Phone: The Good, The Bad, The Uglyâ
Emotional journeys: Promise details of a personal emotional journey - a narrative of growth and change.
Eg. âFinding Joy in the Little Things: My Year-Long Battle With Anxietyâ
Intellectual challenges: Promise details of an intellectual journey and the challenges faced in understanding a topic.
Eg. âI Did A 1-Week Crash Course In Italian - Was It A Waste?â
Professional growth: Promise a glimpse into the journey of progressing a career or business.
Eg. â7 Lessons I Learned From Selling a 6-Figure Blogging Businessâ
And It Works For Any Type Of ContentâŠ
You may think this headline technique is restricted to advice columns and product reviews.
Nope.
You can highlight your firsthand experience in any content style or format.
Here are some more examples:
How-To Content: âMy Tried-And-True 4-Step Method For Perfect Sourdough Breadâ
Informative Content: âUnderground Street Racing: Terrifying Insights From A 48-Hour Journeyâ
News Content: "Witnessing A Local Election Unfold: My Chaotic Day At The Polls"
Product Reviews: âI Tried The Most Hyped Burger Of 2023 - Was It Worth The Price?â
Case Studies: âI Boosted My Digital Product Sales By 23% In 2 Weeks - Hereâs Howâ
No matter the content type, you can often emphasize that it's based on your own experiences and insights.
And youâll reap the rewards if you do.
If You Found This Content UsefulâŠ
I go through 3 more ways of making your headlines more trustworthy in Headline Magic.
Check it out if youâre interested.
đ° rabbit holes and resources
đ« In case you missed them, here are some of my previous pieces on writing great headlines:
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